The story’s humor FINALLY!
Excellent, excellent news this morning. I found the humor in the story!
Spent time this morning fixing the outline. Then I spent a little more time imagining the story. The addition of Cindy as the primary antagonist makes so much sense. She works perfectly into the plot. In fact, her subplot excites the story. Then I realized Cindy’s efforts to keep Price and Alice apart is the humor of the story. She doesn’t sit idly at home making phone calls. She actively stalks Price, getting crazier as he begins to narrow in on Alice’s where abouts. This is the break I’ve been looking for. I have everything I need now for my story!!!
